Correct inappropriate shifts in pronoun number and person
Key Notes:
- What is an Inappropriate Pronoun Shift?
An inappropriate pronoun shift occurs when a pronoun does not match the antecedent in number (singular/plural) or person (first, second, or third person) within a sentence or passage. This can lead to confusion and inconsistency in writing.
- Pronoun Number Agreement
Pronouns must agree with their antecedents in number—whether the antecedent is singular or plural.
- Singular antecedents require singular pronouns.
- Example:
- Incorrect: A student should do their best on the exam.
- Correct: A student should do his or her best on the exam.
(Here, ‘student’ is singular, so the pronoun must also be singular.)
- Plural antecedents require plural pronouns.
- Example:
- Incorrect: The students should do his or her best on the exam.
- Correct: The students should do their best on the exam.
(Here, ‘students’ is plural, so the pronoun ‘their’ must also be plural.)
- Pronoun Person Agreement
Pronouns must also agree with their antecedents in person (first, second, or third person). Shifting between different persons can create confusion for the reader.
- First Person (I, we): Refers to the speaker.
- Example: I am studying for my test.
- Second Person (you): Refers to the reader or listener.
- Example: You should do your homework.
- Third Person (he, she, it, they): Refers to someone or something else.
- Example: She forgot her notebook.
- Avoiding Shifts in Pronoun Person
Avoid switching between first, second, and third person within the same sentence or paragraph unless the shift is intentional.
- Example of Inappropriate Shift:
- Incorrect: If one wants to succeed, you need to study hard.
(The sentence shifts from third person ‘one’ to second person ‘you’.) - Correct: If one wants to succeed, one needs to study hard.
(Maintains consistent third-person pronouns.) - Example of Inappropriate Shift:
- Incorrect: When we go to the store, you should make a list.
(Shifts from first person ‘we’ to second person ‘you’.) - Correct: When we go to the store, we should make a list.
(Maintains consistent first-person pronouns.)
- Correcting Inappropriate Shifts in Number and Person
Here’s how to correct inappropriate shifts:
- Identify the antecedent: Determine whether the antecedent is singular or plural and which person (first, second, or third) is being used.
- Ensure pronoun consistency: The pronouns in the sentence must match the antecedent in both number and person.
- Example of Corrected Shift in Number:
- Incorrect: When a person comes late, they disrupt the class.
(‘Person’ is singular, but ‘they’ is plural.) - Correct: When a person comes late, he or she disrupts the class.
(Maintains singular pronoun agreement.) - Example of Corrected Shift in Person:
- Incorrect: If you want to pass the exam, one should study every day.
(Shifts from second person ‘you’ to third person ‘one’.) - Correct: If you want to pass the exam, you should study every day.
(Maintains second-person consistency.)
- Consistency in Lists and Series
When listing actions or descriptions, maintain the same pronoun throughout.
- Example of Inconsistent Pronoun Usage:
- Incorrect: When students complete your work, you should review their notes.
(Shifts from second person ‘your’ to third person ‘their’.) - Correct: When students complete their work, they should review their notes.
(Maintains consistent third-person pronouns.)
- Common Mistakes in Shifting Number and Person
- Switching between singular and plural pronouns:
- Incorrect: A teacher should always encourage their students.
- Correct: A teacher should always encourage his or her students.
- Switching between first, second, and third person:
- Incorrect: I am happy when you work hard.
- Correct: I am happy when I work hard. (First person)
- Correct: You are happy when you work hard. (Second person)
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