Correct inappropriate shifts in pronoun number and person

  1. What is an Inappropriate Pronoun Shift?
    An inappropriate pronoun shift occurs when a pronoun does not match the antecedent in number (singular/plural) or person (first, second, or third person) within a sentence or passage. This can lead to confusion and inconsistency in writing.

  1. Pronoun Number Agreement
    Pronouns must agree with their antecedents in number—whether the antecedent is singular or plural.
  • Singular antecedents require singular pronouns.
  • Example:
    • Incorrect: A student should do their best on the exam.
    • Correct: A student should do his or her best on the exam.
      (Here, ‘student’ is singular, so the pronoun must also be singular.)
  • Plural antecedents require plural pronouns.
  • Example:
    • Incorrect: The students should do his or her best on the exam.
    • Correct: The students should do their best on the exam.
      (Here, ‘students’ is plural, so the pronoun ‘their’ must also be plural.)

  1. Pronoun Person Agreement
    Pronouns must also agree with their antecedents in person (first, second, or third person). Shifting between different persons can create confusion for the reader.
  • First Person (I, we): Refers to the speaker.
  • Example: I am studying for my test.
  • Second Person (you): Refers to the reader or listener.
  • Example: You should do your homework.
  • Third Person (he, she, it, they): Refers to someone or something else.
  • Example: She forgot her notebook.

  1. Avoiding Shifts in Pronoun Person
    Avoid switching between first, second, and third person within the same sentence or paragraph unless the shift is intentional.
  • Example of Inappropriate Shift:
  • Incorrect: If one wants to succeed, you need to study hard.
    (The sentence shifts from third person ‘one’ to second person ‘you’.)
  • Correct: If one wants to succeed, one needs to study hard.
    (Maintains consistent third-person pronouns.)
  • Example of Inappropriate Shift:
  • Incorrect: When we go to the store, you should make a list.
    (Shifts from first person ‘we’ to second person ‘you’.)
  • Correct: When we go to the store, we should make a list.
    (Maintains consistent first-person pronouns.)

  1. Correcting Inappropriate Shifts in Number and Person
    Here’s how to correct inappropriate shifts:
  • Identify the antecedent: Determine whether the antecedent is singular or plural and which person (first, second, or third) is being used.
  • Ensure pronoun consistency: The pronouns in the sentence must match the antecedent in both number and person.
  • Example of Corrected Shift in Number:
  • Incorrect: When a person comes late, they disrupt the class.
    (‘Person’ is singular, but ‘they’ is plural.)
  • Correct: When a person comes late, he or she disrupts the class.
    (Maintains singular pronoun agreement.)
  • Example of Corrected Shift in Person:
  • Incorrect: If you want to pass the exam, one should study every day.
    (Shifts from second person ‘you’ to third person ‘one’.)
  • Correct: If you want to pass the exam, you should study every day.
    (Maintains second-person consistency.)

  1. Consistency in Lists and Series
    When listing actions or descriptions, maintain the same pronoun throughout.
  • Example of Inconsistent Pronoun Usage:
  • Incorrect: When students complete your work, you should review their notes.
    (Shifts from second person ‘your’ to third person ‘their’.)
  • Correct: When students complete their work, they should review their notes.
    (Maintains consistent third-person pronouns.)

  1. Common Mistakes in Shifting Number and Person
  • Switching between singular and plural pronouns:
  • Incorrect: A teacher should always encourage their students.
  • Correct: A teacher should always encourage his or her students.
  • Switching between first, second, and third person:
  • Incorrect: I am happy when you work hard.
  • Correct: I am happy when I work hard. (First person)
  • Correct: You are happy when you work hard. (Second person)