Decide whether ellipses are used appropriately
Key notes
1. Introduction to Ellipses
Ellipses consist of three consecutive dots (…) and are used in writing to indicate omitted text, pauses, or unfinished thoughts. Understanding how to use ellipses correctly can enhance clarity and style in writing.
2. Uses of Ellipses
a. Indicating Omitted Text
Ellipses can show that a part of a quotation or text has been omitted, maintaining the overall meaning.
Example:
- Original: “The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog.”
- With Ellipses: “The quick brown fox…over the lazy dog.”
b. Creating Suspense or Pause
Ellipses can create suspense or indicate a pause in dialogue, often reflecting hesitation or an unfinished thought.
Example:
- “I was thinking… maybe we should try something new.”
c. Indicating an Incomplete Thought
When a sentence trails off or is left incomplete, ellipses can signify this absence.
Example:
- “I just don’t know what to say…”
3. When to Use Ellipses
a. In Quotations
When quoting a source, ellipses can be used to omit unnecessary parts without changing the original meaning.
Example:
- Original Quote: “To be or not to be, that is the question.”
- With Ellipses: “To be…that is the question.”
b. In Creative Writing
In creative writing, ellipses can be used to convey a character’s hesitation or emotional state.
Example:
- “I thought you were… never mind.”
4. Common Mistakes to Avoid
- Overusing Ellipses: Using too many ellipses can confuse readers and detract from the clarity of the writing. Use them sparingly.
- Incorrect: “I was going to the store… but… then I changed my mind…”
- Correct: “I was going to the store, but then I changed my mind.”
- Using Ellipses Incorrectly in Quotations: Ensure that ellipses do not alter the original meaning of the text when quoting.
- Incorrect: “The fox jumps… dog.”
- Correct: “The quick brown fox…the lazy dog.”
let’s practice! 🖊️
Read this text.
According to a Japanese myth that attempts to explain earthquakes, a giant catfish called Namazu is buried beneath Japan and sometimes moves its tail, causing the ground to shift.
Is this an appropriate use of an ellipsis?
‘According to a Japanese myth . . . , a giant catfish called Namazu is buried beneath Japan and sometimes moves its tail, causing the ground to shift.’
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