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Source: James Pritchett, ‘What silence taught John Cage: The story of 4’33″‘. Published on RoseWhiteMusic.com, 2009.
Cage enthusiastically embraced the use of percussion instruments as a way of expanding the realm of music to include sounds that more accurately reflected the nature of the industrial culture he observed around him.
Student text:
Percussion in John Cage’s musical compositions was used in such a way as to incorporate ‘sounds that more accurately reflected the nature of the industrial culture’ he witnessed around him (Pritchett).
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